ladyofleithian: (even obi-wan knows you're doing it wrong)
Currently feeling really crappy, stressed, and behind. And tired. *Sighs* And there are still six days to go...

Seriously, if this day could be struck from the record, I'd be grateful.
ladyofleithian: (even obi-wan knows you're doing it wrong)
Currently feeling really crappy, stressed, and behind. And tired. *Sighs* And there are still six days to go...

Seriously, if this day could be struck from the record, I'd be grateful.
ladyofleithian: (come into the light)
Just wanna lie down and make the pain go away. :(
ladyofleithian: (come into the light)
Just wanna lie down and make the pain go away. :(
ladyofleithian: (Default)
I've been struggling with the ending for the first episode of KOTOR II. I don't really know why I'm splitting it into a trilogy, but I think it's so we can cover...well, all the good stuff. So I'll be taking manwe_iluvendil's approach.

Just to outline, for an entire movie:

Inciting Incident: Most likely the vicious attack on the Harbinger by Darth Sion, if only because it kicks off KOTOR II.

Catalyst: The decision to go and find the Jedi Masters.

Midpoint: Meeting Visas Marr.

Crisis Point: The Enclave on Dantooine.

Climax: Telos and Malachor.

Resolution: Everything else, including the decision to find Revan.


Now, if you're covering Peragus:

Inciting Incident: The attack on the Harbinger.

Catalyst: The decision to leave Peragus.

Midpoint: Exploring the wreckage of the Harbinger.

Crisis Point: The chase through the Peragus asteroid field.

Climax: Sion destroys Peragus.

Resolution: Now what?

And then set up Telos and the different planets. Finally, the good stuff, the meat: Onderon, Dantooine and Telos redux, and Malachor.


So yeah. I'll just...do it over with a proper structure, methinks. See you later. :)
ladyofleithian: (Default)
I've been struggling with the ending for the first episode of KOTOR II. I don't really know why I'm splitting it into a trilogy, but I think it's so we can cover...well, all the good stuff. So I'll be taking manwe_iluvendil's approach.

Just to outline, for an entire movie:

Inciting Incident: Most likely the vicious attack on the Harbinger by Darth Sion, if only because it kicks off KOTOR II.

Catalyst: The decision to go and find the Jedi Masters.

Midpoint: Meeting Visas Marr.

Crisis Point: The Enclave on Dantooine.

Climax: Telos and Malachor.

Resolution: Everything else, including the decision to find Revan.


Now, if you're covering Peragus:

Inciting Incident: The attack on the Harbinger.

Catalyst: The decision to leave Peragus.

Midpoint: Exploring the wreckage of the Harbinger.

Crisis Point: The chase through the Peragus asteroid field.

Climax: Sion destroys Peragus.

Resolution: Now what?

And then set up Telos and the different planets. Finally, the good stuff, the meat: Onderon, Dantooine and Telos redux, and Malachor.


So yeah. I'll just...do it over with a proper structure, methinks. See you later. :)

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