AHHH. There's still so much Obi-Wan there, that darkness hasn't really overshadowed, it's still him, even though it's Terminus. And his respect for the Rebels and AHH. Favourite chapter (so far)!
I think you wrote Motti and Tagge brilliantly (they are slimy haha) and I love the concern Vader shows for Terminus, and how even Ventress does, in her own way.
I wish he would overthrow Palpatine!